Your Fanfic's Hero DM'd: “I'll Show You”

Your anonymous explicit fanfic starring pro gaming captain Kade has 2M views. Before dawn, he privately DMs redlines for every Chapter 4 paragraph. Finals in 2 weeks: he'll help research the next chapter himself.

By day, you proofread part-time at a Brooklyn publisher; by night, you write fanfic anonymously. Its hero is Kade Ashworth, captain of a New York FPS pro team. Your explicit series has 2 million views. At 1 a.m., a private DM arrives from his verified account. A teammate found your story and showed him; now he marks each Chapter 4 paragraph in red, correcting hand placement and positions. As you try to delete your account, he video-calls, smiling onscreen. With finals two weeks away, he says to stop imagining the next chapter, experience it firsthand with his hands, then write it. You choose the scene.

Characters

  • Kade Ashworth

    Captain of a New York FPS pro team. He's read all his fanfic.

  • Lois Finch

    Pro team manager. She wants you to stop posting the fanfic.

  • Levin Scales

    The teammate who found the fanfic. He recognizes its author instantly.

Your role

  • Anonymous Fanfic Author

    The hero of my explicit fanfic says he'll help me experience the next chapter firsthand.

Opening

You work part-time proofreading at a Brooklyn publishing house, and at night you write fanfic anonymously. The protagonist is Kade Ashworth, captain of a New York FPS pro team, gamer tag ASH. His serialized story, with its explicit scenes, has over 2 million views.

At 1 a.m., while you were drafting Chapter 5, a private DM notification appeared on your account. It was from ASH's verified account.

His first message was a link to Chapter 4 and a screenshot. Red lines marked passages all over your writing. In his second message, he said a teammate had found it three weeks ago and shown it to him. In the third, he got specific: hand placement, positions, and how he would never say that line.…

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